Gig 105: Comedy Night @ The Beech Inn, Chorlton – 16th April 2013

I don’t really have the energy to write this, but I’m going to give it a go to get it out of the way.  There’s a good chance that it’s not going to be very long.

I’ve not been feeling well for a few weeks now, but have been trying to keep going.  By the time this gig came around, it’s safe to say that I was flagging.  I usually write a couple of pieces for my regular MCing spot at the Beech, and this time was no different.  Well, it was different in that they were more half-hearted than usual.

First there was The Donnie Hotlips Story: Chapter 5.  This fictional biography of one of the regulars has been intentionally uneventful – he had a car crash. but walked away uninjured – and this month I’d planned to write a pastiche of an action film to spice up the story.  When I got around to writing it, I didn’t have much motivation, so I took the synopsis for Die Hard from Wikipedia and substituted mentions of McClane for Hotlips.  Yes, it was a bit lazy, but I felt that I could make that laziness work.

My monthly report about March 2013 was a rewritten and expanded version of one of my first reports (read it here).  I felt a bit cheap in reusing the old report (even though it was performed at a different venue), before realising that  was being utterly ridiculous.

Anyway, I was feeling pretty ropey on the evening of the gig, so my main aim was to get through it.  Which I did, just about.  I don’t really think I was very good, but it’s all a bit of a blur.  My two written pieces didn’t really work.  I think if I had been on better form I could have squeezed some laughs from them, but they just fell a bit flat.

I’m pretty much done.  Yeah, that’s it.  Before I go, I have to tell you about the best thing that’s ever happened to me since I started performing.  After the show, the audience were leaving the pub and I was approached by Donnie Hotlips.  He proudly revealed that he was wearing a “Donnie Hotlips and the Angry Birds World Tour 2013″ t-shirt.  Yes, really: he’d had a t-shirt made about a fake name/history that I’d made up about him.  I was genuinely amazed and thrilled that a bit of my nonsense had seeped out into real life. Amazing.

Gig 102: Comedy Night @ The Beech Inn, Chorlton – 12th March 2013

The Bob Blackman Appreciation SocietyI know I mention the following every month, so I’m just going to deal with it as quickly as possible:

Before the gig, I prepared a few bits of new material.  These were some new jokes, my monthly report (read it here) and the latest chapter of The Donnie Hotlips story (a fictitious biography of one of the night’s regulars – read it here).

OK, now I can get on with the actual write up.

The biggest drama that Tuesday night faced was that Andy, who provides the microphone and amp for the show, hadn’t shown up by the scheduled start time.  He got there 20 minutes late, and so we started 20 minutes late.  Yeah, I know, it doesn’t really qualify as a drama, so I’m not going to act like it was one (yes, I’m talking to you, Dave Turquoise).  It may not have been dramatic, but it did affect the way I started the gig.  As we were already running late, and because we had to fit in 4 acts as well as my monthly report, I put in lots of energy and urgency to make sure the audience were warmed up as soon as possible.

At this point in a post, I’d usually drone on about what happened to me and what I did or didn’t learn from the experience.  You can breathe a sigh of relief as I’m not going to do that.  Sometimes, it’s just a good gig and you have to enjoy it on that level.  All the acts were really strong this month, and the night seemed to keep building as it went on.  The night was topped off by headline act The Bob Blackman Appreciation Society (Johnny Sorrow and Richard Swan), who were amazing.  I couldn’t possibly describe their act, so I just suggest that you go and see them if you get the chance to.

Nights like this are what being involved in comedy is all about.

Gig 98: Comedy Night @ The Beech Inn, Chorlton – 12th February 2013

This gig was my fifth as The Beech Inn Comedy Night’s resident compere.  Since neither my stand up style nor persona lend themselves to standard MCing practice, the challenge has been trying to make it work in a way that makes sense for me.

The comedy night is held in the back room of the pub.  Because the room’s bright and there’s no stage, it feels intimate and informal.  Whilst the audiences aren’t huge, there’s always enough people to make it more than workable, so I try to create inclusive atmosphere in the room.

As usual, I did have a few prepared bits of material:

Some new jokes (a couple of which were road tested at Magical Animals the previous night (Gig 97)).

My monthly report – read it here.

The latest chapter of The Donnie Hotlips story (a fictitious biography of one of the night’s regulars) – read it here.

I usually read the monthly report in lieu of a third act on the running order, but this night would have four acts.  As this month’s headliner would be Gary Morris, a character comedian, the plan was to read the report as he made a costume change.  The other two bits would just be slotted in as and when I saw fit.

The day of the gig was notable as it was the first time that I wasn’t nervous pre-MCing.  I started things off feeling relaxed, but maybe I was a bit too relaxed.  It usually takes a while for me to get going when MCing.  This is partly because I know I’ve got to get the boring admin out of the way (phone off, don’t talk, format of the night), which feels a bit of a chore, but also because you have to take some time to gauge out who’s there and what the mood is. This opening section (of three) felt more of a struggle than usual, although I did get some good feedback, so maybe I just had to put more work in and that’s why it felt tougher.

Keeping in with my approach, I like my bits to feel (intentionally) shambolic, so as to give the night its own feel.  The downside of this is that it can maybe feel a bit too informal.  On this occasion it meant that for the opening act, Freddy Quinne, the audience were too chatty. Luckily, Freddy is an experienced act and so took the disruption in his stride.  At one point during his set, one of the audience members passed me a message (from an act who was running late), so I knew I had to reiterate the rules of the night in between acts.

During the first break, it became apparent that one of the acts wasn’t going to show up.  This meant that I would have to open the second section with my monthly report, and then use the Donnie Hotlips story to fill in when Gary was getting changed.

As the nice went on, I felt really warmed up and was just able to have fun, being daft and messing around.  I was being really silly, but also throwing in lots of awkward pauses and farting about with the microphone stand.  At one point I  spent ages trying to think of a joke on the spot, where I was intentionally stumbling around for something to say, “What do you call…No…why did the….where….” Eventually I came up with a really lame joke about Seabrooks crisps, which, amazingly, got a round of applause.  The joke (if you can call it that) wasn’t great, so it was a good indication of the audience being drawn in.  Compering in such a shambolic way is not going to be to everyone’s tastes and some people perhaps wouldn’t get that it was intentional.  Overall, though, I think that most of the audience enjoyed it and it felt like exactly the way that I should MC a gig.

Anyway, it’s taken me nearly a week to complete this write up and I’m getting fed up with it.  It was an enjoyable night, but there’s still a long way to go in becoming a competent MC.  I need to get myself going quicker and also need to remember that my job is to facilitate the other acts and not to make it the Steven Show.

It was a good laugh, though.

Gig 93: Comedy Night @ The Beech Inn, Chorlton – 15th January 2013

Finally, my first gig of the year.

It had been three and a half weeks since my previous spot (Gig 92) and I was more than ready to get back on the metaphorical comedy horse.  In fairness, I had needed a rest, not from performing but from a busy schedule in general.  The only downside of taking a break is that it’s too easy to become lethargic, and I certainly had gotten très lethargic.  If anything was going to shake me back into action, it would be MCing at The Beech.

I don’t generally suffer from nerves before gigs, but I’m still plagued with trepidation in the build up to  compering a show.  With a normal spot, you get up, do your stuff and then that’s it.  If it goes badly then you know exactly how long you’ve got to go before you can skulk off home with your tail between your legs.  If things go badly as an MC then you know you have to get straight back on stage as soon as the next act has finished.  Ultimately it’s your responsibility to make sure that the night runs smoothly, and that the audience is in the right frame of mind to welcome the comics on stage.  Oh, and you have to make the majority of it up off the top of your head, whilst constantly keeping on top of what’s happening in the room.

I make it sound like a nightmare, but it’s actually really enjoyable, largely because, so far, my worries have been all academic.  Although there have been a few sections that haven’t been amazing, they haven’t been so bad that I wasn’t able to rescue it.

My preparation for these nights has boiled down to 4 areas:

1) A chapter of “The Donnie Hotlips Story” – a fictionalised biography of one of the Beech’s regulars (read this month’s, here)

2) My monthly report – me reading this is usually the first “act” in the second section of the night (read this month’s, here)

3) Some “joke book” jokes – just something I can fall back on. I’d only written 1 new one this month, so used a few old ones.

4) Contingency questions – stupid emergency questions if audience interaction isn’t going well. I didn’t use them last month, but thought it was worth having them (as it turned out, I didn’t use them this month, either).

And that was that.

I had to pick up three friends on the way to the gig – who were coming along to watch –  and I didn’t really speak on the drive over as I was pre-occupied with nerves.  I felt a bit better once we were at the Beech, probably because I had to concentrate on getting things ready to go.  There was already a decent sized audience when we arrived, and there were a few regular faces, so this helped get me in the right frame of mind.

And after that build up, all I can really say is that it seemed to go pretty well.  I made a point of remembering to mention the ground rules and format of the evening, because I forgot to last month.  Erm, yeah.  That’s definitely all I have to tell you. It was a lot of fun and the audience seemed to have a good time.

It’s quite difficult to really know how I’m getting on with MCing.  Although it generally feels like it’s going well from the perspective of being funny, I’m not sure how well I’m doing in my primary duties of keeping the night ticking over and making sure that the audience are primed for the actual acts.  Hopefully I’ll get a better grasp of this as time goes on.

Gig 91: Comedy Night @ The Beech Inn, Chorlton – 11th December 2012

To use a sporting cliché, last month’s Beech Inn Comedy Night (Gig 84) was a game of two halves.  The opening section suffered from me trying to cram in my pre-prepared material, but the later bits went much better as I relaxed and concentrated on what was happening in the room.  It would have been stupid of me to not take something away from the experience, and I decided that this month I’d try and be less prepared and more in the moment from the start.

That’s not to say that I didn’t do any preparation.  I think it’s a good idea to have something to fall back on, and there was also the matter of my regular monthly report.  I came up with 6 new ‘joke book’ jokes, some ‘contingency questions’ (daft questions to ask the audience should ‘Where are you from? What do you do for a living?’ not work) and the obligatory monthly report.  I also decided to write the first chapter of the Donnie Hotlips biography (read it, here). Donnie was the name I gave to an audience member last month, along with an accompanying back story (he was a drummer in a 1970s rock band).  It was far from guaranteed that he’d be back this month, but it didn’t take that long to write and I thought it would be a nice surprise if he did show up.

I was nervous on the afternoon of the gig, which is a recurring theme for these Beech gigs.  It’s not something that really happens in the build up to standard gigs, but when you’re MCing there’s the double whammy of a) knowing you’re going to have to improvise most of your stuff and b) you have the responsibility of ensuring the night runs well.  As the MC, you aren’t expected to be the funniest performer on the night, but you do have to make sure that the audience know what’s expected of them and that they are suitably warmed up enough to enable the acts to be successful.  It’s not an easy job, but luckily it’s extremely rewarding and enjoyable when it goes well.

In the lead up to the gig, I thought about different approaches that I could take.  It struck me that if I was going to be MCing in character as Terry Dowling then I probably wouldn’t be as nervous; I’d feel confident that I’d be able to deal with the improvisation stuff and organisation more easily.  As I wasn’t MCing as Terry, I don’t know for sure if that was true, but it was still an interesting observation.  I tried to use this as a psychological trick to convince myself that I needn’t be so nervous, after all I am Terry.  This technique proved semi-successful.  As I would be primarily making stuff up, I wouldn’t really be able to rehearse, but on the drive over to Chorlton I started  to talk out loud in a stream of consciousness, to warm myself up.

Unlike previous months, the night had 4 acts plus the headliner, meaning that I didn’t need to fill one of the spots entirely with the monthly report.  My report was split into two halves: the first was a unsuccessful explanation of Bonfire Night (read it, here), the second being some “Radio 4 style topical jokes” to make up for the fact that the first part of the report was rubbish   The plan was to split the two parts between the first two sections of the gig.

I was still a bit anxious as the gig was about to start, but it was good to see some familiar faces. If people were coming back then I couldn’t be that terrible as MC.  Just as I was going to kick things off Donnie Hotlips and his wife made an appearance.  At this point I got a bit over excited, and pretty much started the gig with the story.  I think it worked quite well, but I really should have let things go a bit longer and built up to it.  I then quite quickly went into the joke book, where again I should probably have eased into it.  With both of these out of the way – and at some point making the decision to leave the report to the second section – I was left with having to improvise.

From this point on, I find it really hard to judge how I did.  Some bits worked nicely, but I’m not sure I fulfilled all of my roles and responsibilities adequately.  As compere, you need to do admin: explaining the format of the night and laying down ground rules for the audience.  I sloppily explained the format, but completely forgot about the rules. I got away with this because there were lots of regular audience members, and the audience is generally lovely.  If I was compering elsewhere, this would have looked amateurish  and it could prove costly if you don’t make sure the audience are all singing off the same hymn sheet.  Also, some of my introductions for acts were clunky, which I made reference to and light of , but I hope that the acts didn’t think I was being purposefully disrespectful.  I also don’t know if there were times when I brought acts on when there was a bit of a lull; it’s really hard to judge when you’re so wrapped up in the moment.

With the negatives out of the way, I should probably mention some of the stuff that went well.  I felt comfortable with my on-stage persona and was pleased that I didn’t get bogged down when stuff didn’t work and just had the confidence to go with it.  I didn’t have to resort to the contingency questions, instead I got plenty of mileage from asking about how prepared people were for Christmas.  I managed to get a few audience members involved.  Aside from Donnie, there was also Helen and her boyfriend Mr Loverman.  I ended up acting out being a door-to-door charity worker with two friends called David – eventually nicknamed Cruel David and Nice David – and I practiced some rubbish chat-up lines on a young lady called Cat.  I had a lot of fun, and hopefully this came across to the audience.

I opened the second section by explaining that the monthly report was too rubbish to read out, but that I’d do my Radio 4 jokes instead.  I’d written these by looking through Wikipedia’s November 2012 summary, taking individual bits of news and trying to add a stupid tagline.  These jokes were generally quite poor, and, because most news is distressingly tragic, some were really inappropriate.  I wanted to make a thing out of being embarrassed of the inappropriateness and my inability to do this type of material.  The jokes in full were:

Who shot JR? No one. He sadly died of …ahem… complications of throat cancer.

On November 3rd, the city of Turin, Italy, was chosen as 2015 European Capital of Sport.  Critics say that the decision is shrouded in mystery.

Two suicide bombers attacked a restaurant in the Somali capital, Mogadishu, and a security guard is killed in the attack.  Apparently their soup was cold…

During the Syrian civil war, 7 Generals defected to Turkey.  The rest decided to stick with the chicken.

Celtic shocked Barcelona in the 2012–13 UEFA Champions League group stage.  They used one of them hand buzzer things.

Phillip Schofield handed David Cameron a list of suspected sex offenders live on This Morning.  Let’s hope it included the guy who had his hand up Gordon the Gopher’s arse.

The president of the Central African Republic François Bozizé ordered the detention of his son after he refuses to pay a hotel bill.  The son claims he definitely didn’t watch Council Estate Slags 4: Suck My Turkey Twizzler.

Following Israel’s recent assault on Gaza, some footballers sign a letter of condemnation against plans to hold the 2013 UEFA European Under-21 Football Championship in Israel next summer.  Gaza said: “Wie eye, that’s cannie nice of them.”

A freight train derailed at the Stuttgart-Feuerbach station, Germany, after a collision with the railway platform. There were no reports of injuries, but the platform was said to be badly shaken.

A committee charged with developing a new Egyptian constitution released a final draft as protests against sweeping new powers granted to President Mohamed Morsi continue. Protesters claim that the floors don’t need to be that clean.

Governor of New York Andrew Cuomo announced that Hurricane Sandy ran up a bill of $32 billion in New York.  It was very much like a meteorological Brewster’s Millions.

British Prime Minister David Cameron said he backed the principles of the Leveson Inquiry’s recommendations, but has “serious concerns and misgivings” about introducing any new legislation to underpin a regulatory body to oversee the media.  What a twat.

I started with the JR joke but I really didn’t sell the concept of the section well enough, so it just looked like I was making a horrible, cheap joke.  At this point I decided to just pick and choose a few of the less contentious gags, and ended with the David Cameron, as it had a crowd pleasing ‘punchline’.  By the time I’d finished this section, it was time to bring on the acts, and I didn’t have that much more to do.

Overall, it was a great night, with some really good acts: Chris McIlroy, David Tandy, Gunther, Zoe Iqbal and brilliant headliner Peter Brush.  I’ve still got so much to learn as an MC, but it’s great to have such a lovely gig to practice at, and have a lot of fun as I do it.

Gig 81: Comedy Night @ The Beech Inn, Chorlton – 9th October 2012

The diary entry for my previous gig was incredibly short because I didn’t have that much to report.  I have the opposite problem now: I’ve got to write about my first time as an MC.

You may recall that I last month I did the first of my new regular monthly reports at The Beech Inn (Gig 77).  Six days before my second report was due, Dave “A Turkey’s Not Just For Christmas” Turquoise rang me to ask if I also wanted to MC.  I clearly said yes.  MCing is something that I’ve been wanting to try out for a while, so this was a fantastic opportunity, but it also made me want to be a bit sick.

The job of the MC is a difficult one, and anybody who has been to a gig with a bad compere knows how it can kill even a strong bill.  I can imagine how it might look easy: you come one, explain the rules, talk to the audience and then bring on the acts.  And those things are true, but there’s a whole lot more to it than that.  It’s the MC’s responsibilty to ensure that the night runs smoothly.  They have to be funny enough to warm up the crowd, while not being so funny that you take the focus away from the acts.  You have to be best friends with the audience, but also be fully behind the comics no matter what.  You also have certain things that you pretty much have to do: getting the audience to cheer something (“Who’s been to a comedy show before?”), getting another round of applause for the act who has just come off, thanking the audience for coming etc.  Those last things should be straightforward, but they would feel very unnatural to me.  It’s very much a balancing act;  there would be things that are required of me as MC, but I would also want to make sure that I was true to myself.

As a result, I was genuinely nervous for days in the build up to the night.  I’ve not been like that since my first handful of gigs.  The pressure was definitely on.  As such, there was no way that I wasn’t going to prepare properly.  I’d bookmarked the following link last year - http://www.chortle.co.uk/correspondents/2011/09/20/14009/how_to_mc - as it contained some pretty pragmatic advice on the basics of compering; the things I’d definitely have to cover.

The format of the night was going to be:

Opening section: Me (10 minutes) followed by two acts (10 mins each).

Break

Middle Section: Me doing my monthly report (10 mins) followed by another act (10-15 mins)

Break

Headliner (with a brief introduction by me).

As I’d be doing my report in the middle section and only a basic introduction for the closing section, my main area of concern was the opening.  I knew that I’d have to get the admin out of the way, and that I’d have to done some form of audience interaction.  Other than that, I wanted to make sure that I had enough material to fall back on rather than relying on winging it.

The problem with using material is that if you just use your normal set then you’ll soon have burned through everything you have.  Luckily, I already had some new stuff lined up to try at Magical Animals (Gig 80) the night before, so assuming it went OK (and it did), I’d some extra stuff to try.  I also thought I’d use my “joke book” gimmick early on.  It felt like it would be a nice way of getting in some actual gags, but as I’m used to messing around with them, they’d be opportunity to interact with the audience about how they were working.   I also felt that I needed a fall back position when I inevitably would  have to try audience interaction proper (“what’s your name? what do you do for a living?”).  Asking these sorts of questions do not feel natural for me as a person or as a performer, so didn’t feel like a rich seam of potential humour. I came up with the idea of “contingency questions”; silly or rude questions that the audience hopefully wouldn’t be expecting.  I also made sure I had enough material to cover not just the opening 10 minutes, but also if there were any points where I needed to fill, or if the audience had lulled.

Despite my preparation, I was extremely nervous on the drive over to Chorlton; I was concerned about the responsibility of my role as much as the performing.  Although I had a basic plan of attack, I still wasn’t entirely sure how I’d handle the admin stuff.  I knew what I needed to say, so I decided to just say it and see what happened.  One thing that I did do was to declare almost immediately that I have a naturally sarcastic sounding voice (which is true).  When you have to thank the audience, get people excited for the acts, and demand applause, it would be pretty easy for this to get derailed if they didn’t believe I meant any of it.  I’m glad that I took this approach because a) some of the things I said did sound sarcastic and b) it gave me an angle to play with.

Things probably started a little slowly as I got the admin out of the way.  Even though I said pretty much the same things that I’ve heard every MC say, it was still the first time that I’ve said them, so it was nice when they were out of the way.  I also felt a little self conscious that I wasn’t doing or saying anything funny and was longing to get to that bit.  I jumped into the joke book and this worked pretty well.  The jokes didn’t go down that well – they’re not necessarily supposed to – but it gave me lots of scope to bounce off the audience and attempt to explain the punchline to anyone who didn’t get it. Things seemed to improve as the opening section progressed and I was able to grow into the role.  I managed to do a bit of audience participation, introduce the contingency questions and throw in some material.  It all seemed to come together.  After the first act had finished, I did one short bit of material and then brought on the second comic. Things were going well.

In the middle section, I went into my “Monthly Report”.  I usually post a copy of this on The World of Sherby57 and link to it, but there were a few bits that I might use again, so I won’t do that.  Sorry.  Anyway, it seemed to go OK, and got some laughs, but it was quite difficult to judge as I was simultaneously an act and the MC.  I had relaxed considerably by this point and so it was relatively easy to wrap the rest of the show up. I did forget to thank the other acts at the very end, but once this was pointed out to me, I jumped back on the mic and made a joke of it.  I was finished.

All in all, I didn’t completely fail and so it goes down as a win.  As with any of this comedy stuff, it’s a massive learning curve and there’s something to be gleaned from every gig.  This was just lesson one for me as an MC.  There were parts of the process that felt deeply odd to me – thanking the acts, saying their names to get the round of applause, getting used to having to come back on etc – which aren’t odd in themselves, but are just things that I wouldn’t naturally do as an act.  These things will only get easy with practice and when I work out how to do them in a way that suits me.

Hopefully they’ll have me back next month and I can try again.

Gig 77: Comedy Night @ The Beech Inn, Chorlton – 11th September 2012

I was asked by Dave “Uncle Dave” Turquoise to resurrect my “monthly report” feature previously performed at Mouthin’ Off (Gig 37 & Gig 44).  I jumped at the chance as it could possibly turn into a regular spot and it would give me the chance to try out a different type of material.  The only possible fly in the ointment was that I was already booked in to do the Cofilmic Sitcom Showcase (Gig 76a), but, fortunately, the showcase started early and I’d be able to do both.

I really enjoyed writing the report –  which you can read here – but I was slightly anxious about performing it in front of a stand up audience.  Mouthin’ Off was a spoken word night, so, although I considered my bit to be comedy, there wasn’t the same pressure to be funny.   The audience at the Beech would be expecting me to make them laugh, and it would be, essentially, the same as doing a whole set of new material.  It would also be a contiguous piece, so it’s not like I could just start doing something else if it wasn’t working (well, I guess I could have just dropped it and done straight stand up, but that would be weird).   It was a bonus that I’d be able to read it out rather than learn it, and it would also give me the ability to play around with it more, and, hopefully squeeze out a few extra laughs.

I left the sitcom showcase during the interval and got to the Beech just as MC Vince Atta had started (Uncle Dave was nowhere to be seen).  I was on first in the second section, so I had a bit of time to get myself together (not that I really needed that much getting together).  In the end, it went quite well.  Some bits, inevitably, fell flat, but I was able to mess around with it, and got some decent laughs.  Hopefully I repeat the format on a regular basis and get to know better what does and doesn’t work.

The most interesting aspect, for me, was how I had been influenced by what I had been listening to.  I’ve recently been going through the entire back catalogue of the Peacock and Gamble podcast and had listening to maybe 20 episodes in the week leading up to the gig.  This had a weird effect on my performance and I could feel myself unconsciously aping their delivery, to some extent. It was a weird feeling.  I didn’t like thinking that I was copying someone else, but it felt oddly liberating to have my performance tinged by something out of my control.  I’m booked in to do my report on the 9th October, so you’ll have to come along and see if I’m still subconsciously imitating them.

It’s probably a good a time as ever to address a) my total lack of enthusiasm for writing these posts and b) a  distinct lack of gigs.  Erm, in short, I don’t really know why, but I think the two are linked.  I feel like I still have the same desire to perform and create comedy, but I don’t seem to have the energy to going about it.  I don’t know if it’s just a side effect of trying to do this whilst maintaining a full-time job, but I feel a bit weary at the moment.  Maybe it’s just a natural lull.  I guess that I am still performing semi-regularly and do, eventually, update my gig diary, so I’ve not given up entirely.

Gig 63: Comedy Night @ The Beech Inn, Chorlton – 12th June 2012

Some of you may remember that a few weeks ago, one of my gigs got cancelled due to lack of audience (NOT Gig 59), and subsequently all comedy gigs were abandoned at that venue.  Well, local impressario, Sir David Turquoise, is not a man to be deterred by such setbacks and last night’s gig was the first in the night’s new home at The Beech Inn in Chorlton.

The original gig was going to be my first performing a 15-minute spot, so it was great to be asked to do the replacement gig to give me chance to finally break that particular duck.  Luckily, this already meant that I had a set list that I could use, all with existing material, so it would take relatively little practice to get prepared which was useful when I had done two gigs of completely new material in the previous few days (Gig 61 and Gig 62).  Somewhat surprisingly, this was going to be my first straight stand up gig for just over a month (Gig 55), but I’ve been performing pretty regularly, so I didn’t feel too worried about being rusty.  For a free night, the line up was amazingly strong: Rob Hallam, Eddie Hoo and Seymour Mace headlining.  I guess I could have found this a bit intimidating, but I was more focused on seeing if I could pull off a 15-minute spot.  My set list was:

“This really shifty bloke came up to me…” followed by joke book variant: “these are definitely jokes” – This is a combination I first tried at Gig 53, where it felt like it really worked.   The joke book bit really benefits from this particular conceit as it allows me to do really strong asides, which get better laughs than the actual jokes.  I went with 8 jokes – I usually do 5 – basically in an attempt to use up a bit more time (I wasn’t sure I would have 15 minutes when I first put the set together).  I should probably have stuck with 5 jokes.

Stretched Cat – It felt a bit weird not doing this as my opener, but I was able to tie it into the first two bits in a way that I liked.

Arnie

“Can’t fight the Moonlight”

Personal Bit + Personal Bit 2 – As I mentioned in my NOT Gig 59, I’d tweaked this section quite a bit as it’s been an inconsistent performer.  Unfortunately, there was a particularly chatty audience member on the front row and she spoiled one of the early (and usually most successful) punchlines.   I struggled a bit to think how to continue, and I eventually said outright that she’d ruined the joke, and then kind of moved over it.  She continued to pipe up throughout this section and it put my timing off.  I’ve not really had to deal with anyone being so disruptive before, and I tried to handle it by not having a go at her, as it’s not my style and really wouldn’t help me in getting back onto my material.  I think I perhaps just about got away with dealing with it, but it certainly affected the rest of my performance.  It also meant that I still don’t have a handle on this bit of material and still think it needs re-writing.

Telephone Books – I checked my watch after this bit (yes, I’d remembered to start it…but only after I had already got on stage), and had already done 12-13 minutes.  I decided to go with…

Jacob’s Cob – I like reading these sort of stories out, to give a different feel to the set, but it didn’t really work tonight.  With hindsight, the performance of them really has to be spot on to get the laughs, and I think the earlier encounter had thrown me off just enough that I didn’t emphasise in the right places, and didn’t do enough asides.  By the time I had finished it, I was 15 minutes in, meaning that I had to skip some bits.

Fergie Swap + “So she lost her job…” + Political Poem + Peter Andre – All skipped for time.

One Day in Liverpool – Even though I was over my time, I didn’t want to end on the slight damp squib of the story, so went with the short play.  It seemed to work, except that the girl on the front row again messed up my punchline at the very end, leaving me with a slightly odd feeling at the conclusion.

In the end, I did 18 minutes, and it generally went OK.  I got some good feedback afterwards, so at least I wasn’t completely out of my depth.  It felt like a big deal to finally do a longer set, and hopefully I’ll get chance to do it again soon.

NOT Gig 59: Crack Up Comedy @ The Nip and Tipple, Chorlton, Manchester – 20th May 2012

So, the first week of my second year in comedy draws to a close, and it’s safe to say that it’s been a mixed bag (at best).  On Monday, I pulled out of Magical Animals (NOT Gig 58) due to potential traffic congestion.  On Thursday, I died on my arse in Huddersfield (Gig 58).  Tonight, I was supposed to be gigging at Crack Up Comedy in Chorlton, but it was abandoned due to lack of audience.

I hope this week isn’t indicative of how things are going to go this year.

It was disappointing not to get the perform, but at least the preparation for it useful.  This gig was going to be my first time performing a 15-minute spot, so I had to work out whether I actually had 15 minutes of material.  As it turns out, I easily had 15 minutes, but this was helped enormously by bringing back my “Personal Bit”.  It’s the only bit I’ve got that hangs together as a 4-5 minute piece.  It’s also a bit that sometimes works really well and other times is a bit flat.  The last time I tried it was in Gig 46, after which I wrote:

My “personal bit” still appears to be a conundrum, but I think I need to sit down and try a re-write of the whole segment before I can really pass judgement.

Although, I didn’t do a complete re-write, I certainly gave it a good tweak.  I didn’t add or remove any of the jokes, but have re-phrased a lot of the set-ups and have added a pause or two in order to maximise the laughs.  I also officially tagged on a bit from “Personal Bit 2″ onto the end of it.  Sadly, I didn’t get to find out how the changes worked, but at least they’re ready to go for the next time.

Oh well, let’s hope the next week is more successful.

Gig 44: Mouthin’ Off @ The Nip and Tipple, Chorlton, Manchester – 1st April 2012

So, Mouthin’ Off was cancelled last night as the bar exploded and everyone in south Manchester was killed….haha! April Fool etc.

In case you didn’t get it, that was a joke.  Mouthin’ Off did actually happen and it had a comedic theme inspired by the 1st of April date, which is why, you know, I started with the April Fool thing.  I feel like I may have over-explained this.

Anyway, I didn’t go down that well at last month’s inaugural event – Gig 37 – but I decided to stick with the same format and hoped that the more light-hearted theme might help me out.  I started with another retrospective look at the previous month (which is going to be my regular thing at M.O.) called Stevie Price’s Let’s Talk About March, Baby (click it and you can read it).  I followed this up with a specially written poem (I was hedging my bets by throwing a bit of poetry in) called Bernard: A True Story\Poem.  I finished with a rendition of moving, erotic tale “Jacob’s Cob”, a story I used to try in straight stand up which hasn’t been seen since Gig 21.

In short, it all went down well, and I really enjoyed myself.  I know you prefer it when I die on my arse and something embarrassing happens, so sorry about that.  Overall, it was a terrific night of entertainment, with a stellar second half featuring Seymour Mace (doing a poetry set), Max Seymour and Marvin Cheeseman.  It looks like Mouthin’ Off could develop into a great night, and Andy, the organiser, is looking for all sorts of spoken word acts to give the night an eclectic feel.  If you fancy doing an open spot, his e-mail address is on the poster to my right…

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